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Friday, September 11, 2020

snoopy is stuck in the car seat

hi guys here is my writing i named it snoopy is stuck in a car seat, why i choose the narrative writing is because it looked so cute and had a lot of details. Here it is enjoy!!!!!


Pl character 
Snoopy has cute bold eyes, his body is flabby and flexible. Snoopy looks at his feet that are as big as
sandwiches. He looks at his long and luxurious fur that is white like snow and brown like chocolate. He
likes making people smile and laugh but at this moment he can't, snoopy is sporty,funny and cute. 


P2 see
Snoopy can see an adorable puppy snoopy. Inside the car there are bumpy seats and shiny leather seats
and bright red seat belts. There is also a gloomy interior. Hear All The sudden snoopy hears low level
whining, in the background, there is screeching car noises and loud  thunder noises with torrential rain.
smell He can smell a fresh clinically clean car with a wind of damp puppy fur, in the car there is a smell of
homely humans. Touch snoopy can feel sticky tight seats with puppy fur all over. 


P3 problem 

Snoopy got scared by  lightning and thunder and got really sad and tripped and fell down into the middle
of the seat and sat there for ages. He was stuck. 



P4 solution 

After a couple of hours snoopy's owner dottie came in the car because she realized she left some food
in the car because she went food shopping and rushed inside. The lightning hit and scared dottie.
She went in the car and saw snoopy, she felt so bad. So dottie picked him up and they went inside the
warm and lovely house and played a game of tug of war  

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