Writing ( Winnies experience at willow bank )

 hello reader for 3 weeks now I have been working on a story about how Winnie and friends went to willow bank but some drama happened, find out what happened in the story! 

Once upon a time Winnie and friends were sitting around  the hazel brown ancient table debating about where they might go on this glorious day. Then all the sudden they had agreed to go and see their best mates at willow bank. Individually they all rushed out the door, so joyful. As they walked down the luminous city, Winnies angelic honey yellow eyes twinkle in the sun as they bolted because they could see the Willow bank sign, as they were running Winnies chubby cheeks were bouncing like a basketball. 

Winnie and friends all walked into willow bank very excited, so excited that they all were about to blow up. They grabbed all the food for their friends and carried on to the front desk. 

They put all of the food onto the desk and then went to go and find his credit card, he soon found it and swiped it and then the lady said um what is this money. Winnie soon said a hundred acre wood money. Oh we only take New Zealand money the lady said, oh said winnie then he dropped and walked away very sad and devastated. 

All the sudden he saw a familiar face in disguise. It was Christoper Robin! He came up to Winnie and handed him his birthday savings. All of a sudden Winnie felt warm inside and very shocked.Winnie went sprinting inside then the rest followed him. They had been accepted into the animal exhibit. They fed all the animals except one and it was one of their old friends ostrich.