The miniature society Writing 27.9.21

 This week we had to do a descriptive writing about a can coke picture with miniature people. I really enjoyed this because i could come up with many different descriptive words. Here is my Writing hope you enjoy. 

Who would like to go to the numb tasting L&P can? said the boss, Lucy, Trish and Seaeun put their hands up, off they went. ¨ Who would like to go to a sticky bubbly  Coke can?¨ Said the boss again. Jaydah, Karaitiana and Victoria, put their hands up. They got told to go to Avon river, so they went. Soon after they were all there! They could not find the coke river, so they reported it to the boss. ¨ It is impossible to find this place¨. ¨ Oh, said  the boss, I forgot to tell you if you dive into the clearwater river and you have a great look around you should find it!¨ They all said together let's do it! Off they went. They were diving for one minute when they found a dark red can with sparkling letters. I found it, said Victoria. Let's go there, said Karaitiana! Then they went there. Jaydah was terrified of the dark, her neck hairs stood up and she knew that something was up. ¨ This looks a bit sketchy,'' said Jaydah with her body shaking like an earthquake. Let's just get it over and done with. They went in the horrifying underground pitch black river. As they went in there was something white that was bubbling. AHH said Karaitiana, SWIMMM. Jaydah and Victoria wanted to investigate more. They stayed in. They took a good look at the big white pebble. 3 2 1…. BOOM. The White pebble thing exploded. Jaydah and Victoria got blasted up onto the land. It was like a big volcanic explosion. 30 minutes later Jaydah and Victoria ended in hospital. Jaydah had a broken leg and Victoria had a broken arm. Couple of days later they were out having fun.